Sawa 14 August is a reflection of Pakistan’s selective amnesia.
Written by famous playwright Anwar Maqsood and directed by Dawar Mehmood of KopyKats productions, the 90-minute one-act play gives a deluded and simplistic account of more than four decades of history.
While the play is primarily about “the two people who contributed most to Pakistan’s destruction” — General Ziaul Haq and Zulfiqar Ali Bhutto — it manages to mention everything that appears on the checklist of Pakistan’s problems. Drones, negotiations with the Taliban, Pakistan Peoples Party’s governance (or lack of), assassination of Nawab Akbar Bugti, PIA , railways, Pervez Musharraf’s arrest, target killings and of course, the “minorities” — you name it, they have it.
Given the growth of theatre in Pakistan in recent years in which we have seen some brilliant performances, the acting of Gohar Rasheed as Ziaul Haq, Wassam Waheed as Bhutto and Zahid Ahmed as Quaid-e-Azam Muhammad Ali Jinnah, were fairly mediocre. The exaggerated sulk and hunch and loud and emotional speeches meant to add patriotic fervour made for a generally poor performance.
But one actor who does outstandingly well is Yasir Hussain, who plays three different characters — a Sindhi politician, a Pakhtun poet and an aged man on the railway station. Hussain has brilliant dialogue delivery and steals the stage with his presence each time.
The weakest part of the play is the script itself. It thrives on the sadistic pleasure of counting present losses and thinking back to a glorious past — the existence of which, is of course, debatable.
The separation of East Pakistan surfaces at various instances with Jinnah criticising Bhutto for the split between the two sides. It seems that the creation of Bangladesh has left a deep scar on the writer as it is discussed with a great sense of loss in both Pawnay 14 August and Sawa 14 August. But although there is repeated mention of the incident, the script puts the onus solely on Bhutto. In fact, he is made to seem almost nonchalant over the matter. At one point he says, “Woh to kabhi Pakistan ka hissa tha hi nahi [East Pakistan was never a part of the country].”
This version of history does not only reflect a selective amnesia, but is also dishonest. There is no mention of the riots over the national language, decades of economic neglect, discrimination or human rights violations by the Pakistani state that existed prior to the emergence of Bangladesh.
The script is similar in its mention of Balochistan. While there is a Sindhi, Pakhtun, Punjabi and one character who seems to be a mahajir, there is no Baloch. When the Pakhtun poet (who for some unexplainable reason carries a parrot with him) is asked about how things are in Balochistan, he says there is a problem in the ‘Bugti rag’. Very intelligent. Very witty. Very simplistic.
The script hinges its humour on stereotypes from the clueless PPP voter, to the elite Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaaf supporter and Pakhtun accents. Classist humour at one part of the play is particularly shocking when there is a dialogue on ‘maasi tumhay Mercedez ki sair karoun’. Worse than the dialogue itself, is the roar of laughter from the audience at this point.
Jinnah’s emphatic message for students at the end of the play is yet another loophole. In an emotional speech, he tells students to concentrate on their studies and not indulge in politics. This is particularly surprising for the portrayal of a man who encouraged students to direct their energies towards attaining Pakistan. The inclusion of student politics by Maqsood is both surprising and out of place, especially because the play bashes politicians throughout. The writer does not seem to recognise that it is perhaps the restriction on student politics that has led to the political vacuum we suffer from today.
If sensitive and controversial matters are to be discussed, they must be told with a greater degree of honesty. While the intention of the writer and director to tell the history of Pakistan to the younger generations may well be good, telling half the story is more dangerous than not saying anything at all.
Published in The Express Tribune, August 24th, 2013.
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just saw the play. There may be entertaining one liners in the play but it gives a distorted view of history by blaming East Pakistan debacle onto Bhutto very carelessly. Bhutto was not even in power. It was Yahya Khan. He may have had a part to play but to blame him solely was grossly unfair. the writer of the review points out very aptly and is indeed right. It was flawed history with sketch show comedy laced with a tarka of patriotic sermons.
brilliant play, i really enjoyed it and i ill go again to watch it.
I haven't seen the play, but I don't understand why its normal for a person to write one week about floods and relief, then on another write about US policy on Afghanistan, and suddenly from lack of proper trained reviewers for theater are allowed to publicly print their opinion on stage plays.
CAN SOMEONE EXPLAIN WHY THERE ISN'T A SINGLE QUALIFIED REVIEWER FOR STAGE PLAYS IN THE PAKISTANI PRESS?
I mean I don't know if I agree or not but that's the whole point. Any review that comes out on ET is redundant and the reader needs to go make up his own mind anyway. Now if there was a person whose reviews could be trusted, the people's time and money could genuinely stop being wasted.
Jinnahs speech at the end of the show could have been touchy had he spoken in Urdu. Just the way he talked in Urdu during entire performance.
Abay yaar anwar maqsoods plays are the only plays that have turned theatre into such a booming industry in karachi what else do u want? Ive seen the play thrice and i think this is a lil bit unfair with the team..i think this team is the obly team that knows what its doind for gods sake plz encourage such plays
Ok this is a bad review. Just saw the play today and it is beyond excellence. I think il go again
i love the theater and 'buy' tickets, but when it comes to anwar maqsood's brand of humor it's passe to the extent it simply borders on puns and every 2nd dialogue is injected with innuendos, which becomes sickening! i don't get it! what is the purpose of such history lessons on stage? as is we have programs like 'hum sab umeed say hain' so sawa, aadha or poora 14 august is in the same league! those who go gaga over his writing are just following a trend even if they don't like what they watched. and then there are those who praise such a play, and i know for a fact, are the kind who would never go to the theater, but when they get 'free' passes there they are (in their sunday best), and on facebook etc giving the impression of being on an artistic/ intellectual trip the night before! lastly, imagine one stage play in a metropolis like karachi!! so, it's like the circus has come to town! whereas in nearby mumbai there are numerous!
If you want an accurate, complete description of Pakistan's history, go read a textbook for goodness sake.
Giving a critique is one thing, but bashing a play because it was 'simplistic' is stupid. I think you're forgetting the ultimate purpose of a play: It's meant to be enjoyed. Even worse, you scowl at the audience for laughing at the brilliant script -and then you call the script sadistic. How hypocritical.
I'm sure you'll find enough complexity in a roll of textured toilet paper, if that's all you're looking for.
"The writer does not seem to recognise that it is perhaps the restriction on student politics that has led to the political vacuum we suffer from today". This statement is so true because the democratic thoughts and principles start right at the primary school education and at home. I can't comment on the play because I have no idea about it but would have liked to see it if I was in Pakistan.
I've seen the play and enjoyed it. Think you should lighten up a bit, it was not meant to be a serious account of history it was meant to be a comic satire type depiction of popular notions done to give the audience a laugh and that it did. The strong negativity displayed in this piece comes across poorly.
Hahahah...zia ul haq says k aap pe ilzaam tha mashrakee pakistan alag kerney ka..lady did u even hear the dialogues properlyy?..this is an extremely stupid criticism...i think u should read what dawn news and everyone else is talking about...as for the jinnah talking to students...are u serious you dont know about this? The last speech was a mixture of jinnahs best quotes. Me being one of the greatest jinnah fans went into tears when he said those last lines
Ok this is a bad review the play was absolutely out of this world. I tend to know a little about theatre and zahid as jinnah was the best in pakistans history
Re.Jinnahs advice to the students.Jinnah actually said this in a speech made immediately after the attainment of Pakistan,Its like,AB KAAM HO GAYA,AB APNE GHAROON MAIN WAAPAS CHALE JAO.
@Tribune Reader: So it is as they always do.
Maybe Anwar Maqsood should do a preachy play to teach the masses and KopyKats about consumer rights...
"Jinnah’s emphatic message for students at the end of the play is yet another loophole. In an emotional speech, he tells students to concentrate on their studies and not indulge in politics. This is particularly surprising for the portrayal of a man who encouraged students to direct their energies towards attaining Pakistan."
"Jinnah" is giving a message to the young generation of today at the end of the show to focus more on studies instead of indulging in politics. I see nothing wrong in that. It would have been different if it was said somewhere in between the play, as that would have meant "messing" with Jinnah's 'character'. But since it is said at the end as Jinnah's "message" to today's generation, his political or whatever stance then should not be mixed with what the play wants to convey to the viewers as something what Jinnah would want them to do today.
Those planning to see it, Kopy Kat is over selling, ET expose this please.