The seemingly never-ending story unfolding on D-Chowk is now gradually folding up. The capital’s Red Zone resembles a gaping red festering wound on the fair face of this normally manicured locality. The wound however is not just physical; it has seeped puss out of the decomposing body of governance in Pakistan and exposed the terminal illness that plagues the system. The disease has finally been diagnosed.
Yes, it had to take a thousand megawatt shock for the limp body to respond. But respond it has, perhaps fighting for its last breaths. And the rulers — PML-N and their allies and the rest who infest Parliament — are suddenly talking about issues that everyone except them had been talking about for years and years. It had to take a shock for these zombies to lift their chins, look around, and see a tidal wave of discontent, frustration, anger and loathing roaring towards them.
No, this tidal wave is not measured in the numbers gathered outside Parliament on Constitution Avenue. No, this tidal wave is not gauged by the inflammable rhetoric of Imran Khan and Tahirul Qadri, or the pitched battles of their supporters. This tidal wave, in fact, is not even registered by the cacophony on TV screens or the blistering headlines in the morning papers. No, none of this is a true measure of the loathing that is steaming and bubbling like red hot lava inside Mount Vesuvius.
This loathing is a natural reaction of a society in transition. It is a loathing borne of greater exposure to the outside world and the ideas that drive the future. It is a loathing that wraps itself around a new realisation among the rapidly urbanising population of Pakistan that is forced to beg for its natural born rights. It is a loathing that is triggered by the hypocrisy of the ruling elite and the inequality bred by a system twisted and manipulated to serve the interests and agendas of those who have clawed themselves into the corridors of power and privilege. It is a loathing of the disenfranchised and the disbarred; a loathing of those who are denied their fundamental rights and their basic privileges as the citizens of Pakistan. They may be born free, but everywhere they are still in chains.
It is indeed the beginning of the end of the era dominated by rural grandees and urban tycoons. The end may take a while, and it may experience violent convulsions and sporadic eruptions, but the end is nigh. It has to. There is a change in the air. No, perhaps not the change defined by Imran and Qadri, but a change all the same. This change is spurred by harsh realities of a world in transformation. Indeed this transformation is too rapid for the traditional elites to grasp. It is everywhere. Like an angry wave crashing against stony shores, the change is manifesting itself on TV screens, computer screens and cell phone screens; in 3D and 3G; flooding minds with information and awareness and spreading ideas and knowledge at warp speed.
No, this is not our Daddy’s Pakistan. Can someone tell this to the uptight and pompous men and women in Parliament?
The fabled kid has finally pointed out that the emperor has no clothes. For this fabled land has been ravaged by those who have been blessed with all. But it seemed the land was frozen in an era long time ago; an era in which the landed and the privileged grew fat on the sweat and blood of the weak; an era in which time moved in slow motion and progress in slower motion. This was an era when only the selected few rose to positions of power and then exercised this power without restraint, without accountability, without checks and balances. In this era the dispossessed remained without possessions, and the marginalised stayed on the margins.
And everyone accepted this state of affairs. The mighty played their electoral games on their own rules. They mimicked their ancestors and their ancient traditions; drawing strength and self-proclaimed legitimacy from regressive practices and degenerate rituals. And they ravaged this fabled land with a ferociousness hard to imagine.
But now change is in the air. Such hypocrisy and duality cannot endure. The rotting and crumbling status quo cannot endure. This state of affairs — where children go hungry and rulers build temples to democracy — cannot endure. This blatant inequality before law cannot endure. A system that rewards the corrupt and pulverises the weak cannot endure. A governance structure that lets the police torture people while the mighty feed on the bounty of this land cannot endure. A parliament that speaks for its privileges and traditions but cannot legislate true justice cannot endure. A cabinet that makes policies to suit itself while our children cannot go to school, such a cabinet and all that it represents cannot endure.
The last three weeks of turmoil has reminded us that this nation called Pakistan has had enough. No more. The system either reforms, or dies. That’s it. For all our sake, the men and women entrusted with our destiny must see the reality for what it is, not what they would wish it to be.
The fabled kid has spoken.
Published in The Express Tribune, September 7th, 2014.
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true and realistic description of what's going on in a country where only 2percent of people rule and enjoy.
A very thought provocating article Unfortunately such articles fail to provoke the targets, as they invariably turn a Nelson's eye to any form of criticism. More power to your pen, Fahad.
Wonderfully put! you have voiced millions in this country through it...
Wow!!! Great article and expresses my feelings - spot on! Thanks for putting it all on paper..... Thank you!!
A revolution, against the status quo, is in the making. It is time for Pakistani's to recognise this and take control of their destiny.
@Realist: It does not seem that the entire Deep State is involved but few elements of it, some of them near retirement, who wanted to make sure that their real grip on power continues. However, as General Raheel Shareef pointed out Pakistan is faced with growingly complex environment. (There are cross-cutting cleavages that are one of the causes of stalemate.)
Write in a simple style. Flowery language is hardly useful in discussing social issues. Either write in straight forward day to day language or use social scientific language, if you need to get technical.
Fahd - beautifully worded ,But do our Leaders understand English ( what you have written) ,For their degrees are fake ,Almost 95%.Do you think they care ,those sitting in Parliament & out - No !they are there just to show muscular strength nothing else they are all rotten people,But Pakistan Will Rise In Sha Allah with the blessings of Allah & the working class - whose sweat will pay ! Long live Pakistan . Khurshid
Let us all hope that our parliamentarians atleast start bringing the issues faced by common people like health, education and jobs to the parliament and stand together to resolve it like they have together faced a problem which affected them directly
I am not a PTI or PAT supporter but give full marks to IK and TUQ for leading this enlightening of Pakistan, from the lower middle class to upper middle class. I have seen people ridiculing TUQ, but do not elaborate what part of his message they disagree with. People, set aside your impressions of his speaking demeanor and then decide purely on the merit of his message. I cannot disagree with a single thing he says. I was most impressed with his bringing in the minorities to his protest yesterday and the warm welcome they got from the protestors. This is exactly what Pakistan needs, an enlightening of the general population and I for one believe TUQ has been on the forefront talking about a change in the system for many years. Only now everyone else is talking about it.
this is most accurate and honest opinion i have read in a while , and i agree with you sir 100%. I hope our current parliamentarians read it like 1000 times , and i hope they understand .
A superb piece! Beautifully written!
So what was Pakistan's worst kept secret that got out in the writer's estimation? Appears not to have been addressed. And no, nobody is still talking about the problems of this country, sorry to dissapoint you. The problems being talked about are again mere lip synch with IK and Qadri to steal away their limelight. Remember the youth agenda hijack of PML (N) from IK? And how much of wasteful expenditure was made for the youth inthe name of laptop schemes and flag festivals. No Mr. Writer, the beginning of the end as you so naively write, is nothing but smart cunning lip sync. Maturity needed in the article please, not to mention the novelistic style of narration.
Fahad, you didn't use pen in doing this article ,,, you used your tears and heart man. A human must cry reading the truth lined up in sobbing words head and shoulder down ... you put our heart out man. God bless you and you keep writing truth like this till its no more needed and truth becomes the practice
Recognising the problem publicly and bringing it to surface has been achieved successfully; thanks Imran Khan. The forces of status quo can't continue with the subjugation of masses any more; they either change or get kicked into oblivion. Pakistan will rise; no doubt.
" But it seemed the land was frozen in an era long time ago; an era in which the landed and the privileged grew fat on the sweat and blood of the weak; an era in which time moved in slow motion and progress in slower motion. This was an era when only the selected few rose to positions of power and then exercised this power without restraint, without accountability, without checks and balances. In this era the dispossessed remained without possessions, and the marginalised stayed on the margins."
And a little bird told Mr Fahd Husain that the 'Electables' crowding the PTI container are not from the 'Landed and the Privileged'? And Sheikh Rasheed has been a daily wage earner all his life?
Or, has the Great Khan promised to redistribute the lands of the 'Landed' to the 'Dispossessed' and the 'Marginalised'?
Looks like the would be Emperor is as shorn of any vestments as any alleged emperor.
"The system either reforms, or dies." The system would definitely reform itself. Why should you make people feel pessimistic about the present system. Plus why do you use stinking (mods pleased substitute "stinking" with "inappropriate," if you deem appropriate) language when you state: "...it has seeped puss out of the decomposing body of governance in Pakistan and exposed the terminal illness that plagues the system.?" Sad!
This article should be preserved in Pakistan's history to reflect why common people came out on streets and against what exactly.
You said it.....and said it good. I wish I had read this earlier and though I am not a ' fabled kid ' anymore but my heart and my mind certainly agrees with him
If you think it is for reforming the system which everyone is for, then my friend I would like to disagree. Look at the people who are in support, even if we leave IK out although I wont be doing so as it is all about power games and nothing else. If someone wanted to bring reforms there were many better ways including moral pressures which would have been difficult to ignore.
"No, none of this is a true measure of the loathing that is steaming and bubbling like red hot lava inside Mount Vesuvius." This article reflects what the majority feel but were unable to put in words. A well written insight.
@Realist: " I can understand the rigging rhetoric and model town incident." First of all it was not rigging rhetoric, if it was then why NS was so adamant not to have verification done in the 4 constituencies IK was demanding initially 14 months ago, why was NS so scared of the re-count. And above all MODEL TOWN MASSACRE WAS NOT AN INCIDENT LIKE YOU SAY. MURDERING 14 UNARMED POLITICAL ACTIVISTS IS NOT AN INCIDENT, IT IS CALLED MASSACRE IN CIVILIZED COUNTRIES. SHAME ON YOU.
Emperor look so tired and restless he could not sleep of noises of truth on his front door is bothering him more and more and slaping him like dropes of Monsoon rain. may god bless the technology ....
Slogan for CHANGE by the 2 parties have shaken the wits out of the status quo political parties, it has exposed them to be on the side of so-called democracy in support of the present system which only suites them. Having said that, the dharna or rally - call whatever you may like, has certainly given these selfish political elites sleepless night for sure. Whether these dharnas were right or wrong only time will prove, because it has awaken people from the middle class who constitutes a major shareholder in economic development, whether these political parties & their supporters agree or not.
Now CHANGE is inevitable...
Fahad Sb has very rightly summed up " what is on way ".
A good piece. But a change is not spontaneous and it doesn't occur unaided by a leader or a statesman. Yes, the people of Pak have woken up and seen the wrongs meted out to them. But how was that even possible without someone urging them to wake up or even pay attention. Systems don't change overnight by some magic wand being waved. The government is still not addressing issues affecting the common Pakistani, so you're wrong about that. And if these two marches and their leaders were not speaking the current govt would be doing exactly what they have been doing for the last 14 months and indeed last 3 decades, running the country in a way that lines their own pockets. There is hint of dislike in your piece towards Qadri and Khan, so you adeptly avoid attributing this 'awakening' to them but the truth of the matter is NO ONE was even speaking of change until the protests began. Change was just a stylish phenomena being discussed in elitist/liberal drawing rooms over a cup of coffee.
@Shah ghulam qadir:
Is democracy prevalent in CHINA yet they are far ahead ( today # 2 economic power in the world ) than all the countries you have mentioned.
It is not democracy that makes things go around efficiently, but a system that governs it & CHINA has proved it....
EXQUISITE , A piece from heart I must say .
Pakistan has changed , Generations from 40's, 50's and 60's failed badly and they still don't want to admit along with keep trying on failing our generations of 70's , 80's , 90's .
But we will fight for our future and people after us .
Must appreciate the way you have effectively used the classic story to convey the message. Let's hope that this nation will soon join the voice fabled Kid.
truly change is in the air..
truly the voice of nation....massive change in the air.....
WOW...I mean seriously..people like you are the reason why being a Pakistani still makes me proud...this was an amazing and thought provoking piece of writing.
what an epic piece...
"It has always been the prerogative of children and half-wits to point out the emperor has no clothes. But the half-wit remains a half-wit, and the emperor remains an emperor," - Neil Gaiman
Yes, there has been a shock to the system. And yes, Khan has pulled off a miracle: he got an apathetic and silent majority to become politically active again. But the old guard is still in power. And short of turning ourselves over to the military (again), the old guard is likely to remain in power.
Change does not come from merely claiming change has arrived on TV. Real, lasting change is an incredibly slow, laborious and boring process, in sharp contrast to the messiah's promise of sudden, sweeping reforms.
You're reading too much into this situation.
We all know how fragile democratic governments are in Pakistan. When opposition parties get particularly berserk, it indicates a certain connection. That's what happened in the 90s, in PPP's tenure and happening now.
Someone, somewhere has propelled some people. The government is obviously shaken.
That's about it. Nothing much else to it. Except for one thing. We, now, know who, what and where is the real epicenter of power in Pakistan.
True, I agree with the need for change. I share the same urge with lots and lots of other people who support PTI. But cannot put my faith in dharna, which does not promise any change, with so many people from the status-quo standing on both sides of Imran Khan. He himself has made his conduct questionable through his recklessness. We cannot place the fate of our country in the hands of such a mercurial man. Tahir ul Qadri is not even worth commenting. I believe that stability and gradual change is more important for Pakistan than disruptive and chaotic revolution. I believe that institutions in Pakistan should be reformed and strengthened from within. Throwing away everything is not the solution. We are a nuclear state and we will not be allowed to go through french style revolutions. Lets try British style.
"The system is rotten, so .........". In the past this sentence has been completed thus: "let's hand over ourselves to the generals". If this time the sentence will be completed differently, something along the lines "let us civilians reform the system using democratic means" I am all for it. If it will be completed the same way it always has been, I'd rather keep this semi-broken system. Military rule is another way of saying "we want to regress a couple of decades, then wake up and start crawling again".
Brilliant Fahd.The best article on current situation
Very good fahad. I just hope someone prints this off and hands it to the emperor. Or at least reads it out aloud to him. I get the feeling reading is not the emperor's strong suit.
Irony and urfortunate is the system which cannot endure has been thriving, flourishing and in now last three weeks it has further strenghten that is far from measurable. Don't you noticed how they gather once and conducted Joint session consecutive days to protect their own realm! They are one when it comes to protect status quo.
A good expression of the feelings of many in Pakistan except the rich and the powerful. A well written piece. I agree with Vinsin that not all people turned up for their rights. Children as young as five cannot possibly have anything to do with their political or human rights. They were there because of their parents' loyalty to perceived charisma of Imran Khan or the fiery rhetoric of Tahir Ul Qadri. Most who turned up were able to afford food at Islamabad prices and hence were not poor or were denied their rights and certainly not for secularism.
Emperor didnt stand a chance. It was a brutal attack by the deep state on government to restore its supremacy. Well scripted with every contingency covered. It only lacked the audience and a good cast. Perhaps that is what saved the emperor. This attack lacked coordinated simultaneous attacks nationwide. I would question the timing of the attack. I can understand the rigging rhetoric and model town incident fueling this attack but it couldnt justify government's performance based on a mere 14 months period. Yes government had failed to do any reforms but right now economic survival is the first priority. Government atleast showed some hope in that regard and seems likely to end this power crisis within its 5 year tenure. That perhaps contributed to stopping people coming out of their homes nationwide. Plus the mere presence of ever mysterious Tahir ul Qadri made things worse for the script writers. He made people suspicious of this whole movement as his track record isnt great. But one thing is for sure the deep state can go to any extent to regain its supremacy even at the expense of Pakistan. Serious soul searching needs to be done within the deep state.
Very well written, It says it all.........proud of you...
An excellent piece truly representing the frustration and the inner feel of fed up enough of the nation regardless of the their political affiliations. However the other side of the story also needs consideration that how the power corridors in the name of preaching democracy has responded to the nation's cry. For the purpose of people of Pakistan they seem unmoved. They are still not into the thought process of thinking for the country but to build taller and thicker walls around their usurped offices by doing the exercise and war of misleading words. The question arises why cries? Who is listening? Who is not listening? And what has it done so far more than pulling their efforts and waking them up only to rescue their kinship not the kingdom!
Nicely written. In fact, very nicely written. But I do wish you had touched upon how exactly this change plans to transition from being in the air to being seen on the ground, and in the corridors of power? We are mired in a system designed to benefit those in power, those at the very center of the axis of evil (pardon the cliche). Our "democratic" system ensures that the urbanised population is voiceless - drowned out by the cacophony of nonsense raised by the rural population of the country. Not that I'm blaming our rural brothers and sisters - they are uneducated and afraid to vote for anyone other than their local 'boss'. But because they are the many, and we are the few, their so called "will" shall prevail.
Democracy looks good, feels good and works well in countries where the people are educated, smart and have the "shaoor" (Urdu word) to know what's good for them. For us, a good old dictatorship is good enough. But then, one could argue that that's what we have right now.
Fahd you have really highlighted the real problem's of our governing system, but what is the answer except democracy,we had enough of military dictatorship but we lost more than gain. Let's get lessons from democracies where nations succeed to achieve their goals. Malaysia,Singapore,India is moving ahead through democratic system let's make this more transparent and achieve the goals for a better Pakistan.
Terrific !!! True depiction of the feelings of a commoner in our country.. I wish that those xombies some how realize that time is running out... Fast...
Worth reading. I urge the writer to use simple words rather then heavy, though a person with my caliber has difficulties getting some of them.
Thanks,
Cable TV, the Internet and the mobile phone are disruptive and democratising technologies. We have seen the effects in India and now it is happening in Pakistan.
A great article begins with an open secret, keep the readers still interested till the end to know, that the emperor has no clothes. However, the question is, if the system is rotten, whether the emperor is at fault? Did the subject not agree when the emperor declared "we will eat the grass, but build the bomb!" Did the emperor produce Talibanis, Jihadis out of thin air without the consent and wishes of the subject? I have read many such good articles which essay what really ails Pakistan, but none come out with any solution to correct it. The question is how do you cleanse the system and where do you begin? Wish the author will come out with another such brilliant piece to "robe the emperor".
Beautiful. Whether or not you support IK, you must support the tearing down of this corrupt status quo. ENOUGH!!!
Excellent piece. I salute you, Fahd for this excellent exposition. Have been a great admire Of your unique style. The incisive razor sharp expressions , the rulers and their allies who infest the parliament, the terminal disease has finally been diagnosed, the emperor has no clothes.. More power to your pen !..
Commendable exposition. But one wonders where and how the high tide will rise to wash it away. Wish the author had touched on that too because present rulers are too dumb to grasp the gravity of the situation. Further for them the stakes are too high. They lose much more than power in a change.
I diagree that people came out for democracy, secularism, freedom of speech, human rights like other non-muslim nations.
" The Emperor has no clothes" +++++++++++++++++++++++ And the Emperor is Pakistan.
One of the best pieces
You are on a roll buddy! Crisp, incisive analysis delivered in beautiful words. Reads more like a touching poem than a dull ET article written by the usual suspects promoting or defending the usual suspects. Great writing!
" It had to take a shock for these zombies to lift their chins, look around, and see a tidal wave of discontent, frustration, anger and loathing roaring towards them." It makes me so proud of our people when I come across some one like Fahd Husain, there are people amongst us who will stand up and see the day of accountability on the horizon and the same very people are the most patriotic people one could find in the country. I see these parliamentarians has thrown their full support behind the prime minister, it is not really the support for him but for themselves. They have invested heavily to be in the Senate or NA and if this government goes so do they. They want to stay to recover 100 fold their initial investments which they have been doing for decades. The following is so true. "It is a loathing of the disenfranchised and the disbarred; a loathing of those who are denied their fundamental rights and their basic privileges as the citizens of Pakistan. They may be born free, but everywhere they are still in chains". You have said it eloquently and hopefully things will change for the better and we see end to the dynastic parties and their politics. Thank you for serving the nation.
I do not have words to express my gratitude to you Fahd on such a classic representation of my feelings about the rotten system and filthy people in power echelon Simply fabulous.